Interactive Fiction that I made

So I mentioned a little while ago that I had been inspired to write interactive fiction and claimed I would post something if I finished it. Since claiming such it turns out that the project I started is going to be massive, so I figured I’d post the first chunk and update it whenever I finish another part. So here it is: Locked In. If anyone can be arsed it would also be nice to get some feedback or info if anyone notices anything that could be changed to improve. If anyone is interesting it is made with a freeware program called Twine.